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MY pie poem(s)

Apr 10, 2004 Urza link
I'm writing poems on pie for english.. 14 in all. i will post them here for review.

#1 (possibly not done)

Bob put the pie in the oven
The oven was set on hot
The pie was made with lovin
Bob wanted to eat pie a lot

Bob set the timer for 1:53
Bob didn’t want it to be burned
Not burning pie is the key
This Bob had learned

When the pie was ready
The pie will be good
Bob told his teddy
Now it’s time for food

The pie was taken out
Warm and tasty looking
A perfect pie just about
All from Bob’s cooking

Before the pie could be ate
The pie had to cool
Bob was forced to wait
And sit around and drool

Bob bit the pie too soon
And burned his mouth
His yell was heard on the moon
And in the deep south
Apr 11, 2004 Sheean link
Why?
Did the Serco cry?
Why?
Did the Valkerie fly?
Why?
Did the trader die?
Why?
Why is the pie so shy?

A dramatic pie, a poem written by Sheean Jabez Jejoma Spoel, (C) 2004 Pat. pending.
Apr 11, 2004 Pyroman_Ace link
Clap Clap Clap

Beautiful! ENCORE ENCORE!
Apr 11, 2004 Suicidal Lemming link
Sheean, how can you patent a poem?
Apr 11, 2004 ctishman link
Ba ba ba bah
ba ba baaaaah
ba baaah bah
The Pie!
Apr 12, 2004 Sheean link
Dramatic Pie *Software* Patent: "A way to dramatize something regarding pies on-screen so the user gets dramatic feelings when seeing the on-screen object."
Apr 12, 2004 RelayeR link
Birdie, birdie in the sky
dropped some whitewash on my eye.
I'm not sad, I don't cry,
I'm just glad that pies don't fly!
Apr 12, 2004 Urza link
The pie eaters sat
Three to a row
The pies were picked
They were ready to go

Little Billy weighed in
At only one oh three
But he felt he could win
His joining had caused a din

Big Ralph on the corner
The five time champ
Weighing around 280
To pie eating he wasn’t a foreigner

Even some women had joined up
Mrs. Molly Clintucket
a woman of class
Ate pie besides Mrs. Knupp

At the ring of a bell
The eaters dug in
Munching through pie
The stopped at the bottom shell

At the 5 minute mark
Little Billy was in the lead
Five pies in his gut
He was leaving the others in the dark

The timer got to the 9
Billy was still winning
He was feeling all right
The winner would get a swine

It was down to the last chew
Ten seconds left to go
When Little Billy stood up
And started to spew

He spewed on Mrs. Clintucket
She blew chunks into her pie
The crowed was covered in bits of pie
Only a few had managed to duck it

Billy had downed 12 pies
Then blown them over the crowd
Everyone was dowsed in bile
Except a few lucky guys

Little Billy lost the contest
But everyone will remember him
For being like the girl in the Exorcist
When she was possessed
Apr 12, 2004 Forum Moderator link
Haiku time:

warm gooey center

surrounded by crusty shell

DIE mouthy player!

..Oh wait, that's not about pie
Apr 12, 2004 Archon link
uh.. urza: http://www.ambrosiasw.com/webboard/Forum10/HTML/011039.html#
.. you or a classmate?
Apr 12, 2004 Forum Moderator link
*sigh* I can't see that link from behind the hefty security I'm under at work, but seeing Ambrosia mentioned makes me wonder if you are comparing me with "forge". If you have been reading 99.9% of my posts on this website, you know that is an unfair comparison.

[Edit: Oh...perhaps I should learn to shut up until I can follow a link, eh?]
Apr 12, 2004 Archon link
Uh.. heh, dear Forum Moderator. I would never _ever_ think you for "forge". The question was directed at Urza, as a Pie-Poem was recently posted at the AmbSW Banter & Brawl as well.

*me hugs Forum Moderator*
Apr 12, 2004 Urza link
me, i felt like sharing wiht the world
Apr 13, 2004 Archon link
YAY! :D