So anyhow after more than half a year I am going to release parts 8 and 9 of The Xetrian story. I did them quickly two months ago but never released it. I would put this in role-playing but it got so much attention way back that I posted it here so some of the old vets see it. :) It hit over 21 pages total in length. Yes I know I have poor english and what not but you must realize I don't write these stories to be professional, I made it for a fun read.

There are two version of it for color a nice grey or pure black on a white background for text. You can always copy and paste it and change it to what ever you like too. :)

www.starfreeze.com/xetrain.html - Grey
www.starfreeze.com/xetrainb.html - Black

If you are new to this story completely this story is based off the old version of Vendetta in which we only had ions, swarms, rockets and news of the frigate coming into the game was a dream.

People in the story. The cast persay.

StarFreeze, FiReMaGe, Sam II, Phoenix, Baccaruda, a1k0n, Peregrine, Roguelazer, Ray(yea ray the dev), Incarnate, Jimce3k, Pod, Casper, Takumi, Verdandi, Icarus, Sara(not an ingame player), Nova6

I just realized not once did I use Waylon in this story, ohh well maybe the next story, who knows.

Some Q&A for ya.

Q: Will you come out with another story based off this one?
A: I've been thinking about this a lot and I'm really pushing towards it. The difference is the next story would also have to change the technology, in this story I had to do a lot of repeating with blue ions because that was basicly the main weapon at the time. A problem with doing it also is the fact that Phoenix is serco now and sam along with baccaruda no longer play completely and they are main characters. So I would have to replace them. So yea I'm going to prolly do another story.

Q: What is the baby's name?
A: You'll have to wait for the next story to find that out. :)

Q: Can I be in the next story?
A: Well we are going to need some new enemies and what not. If I need ingame people's names I will bring up a post about it and you will be able to sign up then.

Q: How can you shutdown a gate if it's not physical in Vendetta?
A: A gate in this story and in future ones is an actual physical device that links main areas together. I tried to keep everything like Vendetta but I decided to change how the gates work, it just seemed boring that you wouldn't be able to shut down a gate.

Q: Isn't Verdandi a guy?!
A: In real life yes, but in this story no.

Enjoy the story.

-StarFreeze

eh, nice story SF.

hehe
There ya go. the Age Old Question. Answered.

Well I did part one of story 2

www.starfreeze.com/darkternixia.html <-Grey Text
www.starfreeze.com/darkternixiab.html <-Black Text

If you haven't read The Xetrian, you should but if you don't it's okay.

From this I conclude, a baby bottle designer will become paranoid and over design the baby bottles.

Ehehe... I bet SF *would* get that frustrated with a baby bottle...

a-m-a-z-i-n-g

-NT Freighter (NTCA)

If you ever need name for enemys, i think i am the perfect guy, i mean everyone hates me, or at least used to, and now is going to hate me again. Since i just got back anyway.

Mwahahahahah fear LeFleau

PS : anyone can tell me about some guy called 'Sadistic Fleau' ? just got back and people asking me if i am him...:)
And i must say ur story are very good, i love em, although i didn't read them all yet (soon done).

If you ever need name for enemys, i think i am the perfect guy, i mean everyone hates me, or at least used to, and now is going to hate me again. Since i just got back anyway.

Mwahahahahah fear LeFleau

PS : anyone can tell me about some guy called 'Sadistic Fleau' ? just got back and people asking me if i am him...:)
And i must say ur story are very good, i love em, although i didn't read them all yet (soon done).

Oh, yeah. Story time. That was fun back when everyone was writing. Maybe now that I'm finishing up with classes I'll have time to work on stories. Currently I have a pile of hand written notes for continuing the 'Cold Front'.

to be the enemy of StarFreeze, you could... become a baby bottle maker.

Sadistic Flea is part of the Sadistic family. :) there's also sadistic mother, sadistic father, sadistic cousin...

StarFreeze i have a couple of questions about that story, 1, why are a1k0n, Icarus and other people helping blue if this a war with the blue nation and red nation???? 2, who is sara? and about the creation of that story, how long did it take for you to think that up?!

heheh a very long time, a1k0n is Itani/blue in these stories, and Icarus is a merc leader not a serco.

Sara is a random name I put in.

think up? I basicly figure out an idea, which I just recently did for the next story, and put that as the main event, then i lead up to it by having battles and what not. Think of it as I go, sometimes I'll just listen to music for 30mins-2hrs at a time like I did for the Xetrian, and just daydream persay about it. Change it to what it seems best in my mind. This newest story I'm trying to show multiple viewpoints and have other characters interact more, so it just isn't me. The problem with the last story was the lack of information I had available to me, like I've said before. This time it should be different because now we've got a brand new array of weapons and ships and what not. :)

ok StarFreeze, but how long did it take you to think up those stories?

sara is not a random name you put in, SF *wink wink*

I think I've read the same story on rogue's fanfic before, but Verd's name was used instead of Sara, so I'm not sure if they are the same story

both Verdandi and Sara are inside the story, and The Xetrian story is one of a kinda so if you did read it or something then it was this one.